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Bittersweet Tears
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Melancholia.
tears flowing
in bitter
sweet streams down
my face and
cooling the recent
wounds of
Desperation.
how
many
will
be
cried
by me
till
these
pains
e x p i r e
tears flowing
in bitter
sweet streams down
my face and
cooling the recent
wounds of
Desperation.
how
many
will
be
cried
by me
till
these
pains
e x p i r e
German version is available at:
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Generally I write my poems in my native language German, but I always try not only to translate but also to transfer/adapt it.
I always appreciate good criticism, wheter it's positiv or negativ.
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Generally I write my poems in my native language German, but I always try not only to translate but also to transfer/adapt it.
I always appreciate good criticism, wheter it's positiv or negativ.
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I love the flowing shape you used on this one; the only thing that kind of mars it for me is the word "gonna"; the rest is all lyrical, and gonna is a bit too casual for the context in my opinion... I personally would make it "will". However, it's a beautiful piece, nice job ^^